Various notes

Several chapters consist only of computer chatting between characters? Me likey
Might work in college; would that still work for busy people in their 40s?

Everyone feels guilty afterwards for not talking to Tony about why homosexuality is awesome; but somebody points out that who would have known it would matter? They were more concerned about his drinking.

Even afterwards, people ignore his drinking as the root cause and focus on his fear of homosexuals? hm.